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- delete trailing whitespace - mention Email in first-time login - character -> key in explanation about tilde and backtick - replace passive voice with active voice in a couple of places
- delete trailing whitespace - remove unnecessary scare-quotes - rephrase parenthetical _exempli gratis_ since we are only talking about microservices there
- did not change the PNG filename since that may break links
- rename Armor to ArmorItem to clarify when we are talking about the class as opposed to the content type
- remove confusing "GCD" section that has doth-protest-too-much "this is not theoretical" sentence; why? - spacing and punctuation
- chop off extra verbiage about names of content features - replace i.e. with that is and e.g. with for example
- wording changes and capitalization
- wording change from "automatically" to "in bulk" to avoid the implication that the import is implicitly invoked
- replace e.g. with such as
- getting rid of more e.g.s
- getting rid of e.g.s in prose section - keeping e.g.s in table since brevity (narrowness) is important there
- reword list of possible game engines - delete UseLegacySerialization section that is not pertinent to any new games nor any current upgrade paths
- mongo -> MongoDB
- correct spelling of config-defaults.txt - formatting on filenames and directory names
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* Copy editing for clarity, text style cleanup - delete trailing whitespace - mention Email in first-time login - character -> key in explanation about tilde and backtick - replace passive voice with active voice in a couple of places * Copy edit account-deletion - delete trailing whitespace - remove unnecessary scare-quotes - rephrase parenthetical _exempli gratis_ since we are only talking about microservices there * Make aliases and avatars agree with plural accounts' possessive. * Capitalize JSON and its -> it is * Backticks around identifiers that might include underscores * Spelling trail -> trial - did not change the PNG filename since that may break links * Delete trailing whitespace and downcase accidental capitalization * Grammar: false -> falsely * Spelling and grammar * Clean up trailing whitespace * Remove unnecessary scare quotes * Correct the JSON syntax for customerScoped note. * Spelling and grammar * Grammar: articles: a and the * Clean up trailing whitespace * Removing incorrect _exempli gratis_ that should have been an _id est_ * Delete unusual trailing underscore * Attempting to clarify the days relative explanation * Replace portal link with support hub link * cloud-save.md - minor spacing and wording * content-getting-started.md review updates - rename Armor to ArmorItem to clarify when we are talking about the class as opposed to the content type * content-overview.md review updates - remove confusing "GCD" section that has doth-protest-too-much "this is not theoretical" sentence; why? - spacing and punctuation * content-unity.md review updates - chop off extra verbiage about names of content features - replace i.e. with that is and e.g. with for example * connectivity.md review updates - wording changes and capitalization * friends.md review updates - wording change from "automatically" to "in bulk" to avoid the implication that the import is implicitly invoked * groups.md review updates - replace e.g. with such as * matchmaking.md review updates - getting rid of more e.g.s * tournaments.md review updates - getting rid of e.g.s in prose section - keeping e.g.s in table since brevity (narrowness) is important there * microservice-framework.md review updates - reword list of possible game engines - delete UseLegacySerialization section that is not pertinent to any new games nor any current upgrade paths * microstorages.md review updates - mongo -> MongoDB * Spacing, punctuation, grammar. * builds-environments.md review updates - correct spelling of config-defaults.txt - formatting on filenames and directory names
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* Copy editing for clarity, text style cleanup - delete trailing whitespace - mention Email in first-time login - character -> key in explanation about tilde and backtick - replace passive voice with active voice in a couple of places * Copy edit account-deletion - delete trailing whitespace - remove unnecessary scare-quotes - rephrase parenthetical _exempli gratis_ since we are only talking about microservices there * Make aliases and avatars agree with plural accounts' possessive. * Capitalize JSON and its -> it is * Backticks around identifiers that might include underscores * Spelling trail -> trial - did not change the PNG filename since that may break links * Delete trailing whitespace and downcase accidental capitalization * Grammar: false -> falsely * Spelling and grammar * Clean up trailing whitespace * Remove unnecessary scare quotes * Correct the JSON syntax for customerScoped note. * Spelling and grammar * Grammar: articles: a and the * Clean up trailing whitespace * Removing incorrect _exempli gratis_ that should have been an _id est_ * Delete unusual trailing underscore * Attempting to clarify the days relative explanation * Replace portal link with support hub link * cloud-save.md - minor spacing and wording * content-getting-started.md review updates - rename Armor to ArmorItem to clarify when we are talking about the class as opposed to the content type * content-overview.md review updates - remove confusing "GCD" section that has doth-protest-too-much "this is not theoretical" sentence; why? - spacing and punctuation * content-unity.md review updates - chop off extra verbiage about names of content features - replace i.e. with that is and e.g. with for example * connectivity.md review updates - wording changes and capitalization * friends.md review updates - wording change from "automatically" to "in bulk" to avoid the implication that the import is implicitly invoked * groups.md review updates - replace e.g. with such as * matchmaking.md review updates - getting rid of more e.g.s * tournaments.md review updates - getting rid of e.g.s in prose section - keeping e.g.s in table since brevity (narrowness) is important there * microservice-framework.md review updates - reword list of possible game engines - delete UseLegacySerialization section that is not pertinent to any new games nor any current upgrade paths * microstorages.md review updates - mongo -> MongoDB * Spacing, punctuation, grammar. * builds-environments.md review updates - correct spelling of config-defaults.txt - formatting on filenames and directory names
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